1. Avoid using a gradiated backgrounds in magazines 2. A longer article is essential 3. The way you've laid the DPS out means it feels as though we are reading it backwards as the page masthead is on the right whilst the article begins on the left 4. The pull quote font on the image is too large and serif. This will need to be changed 5. Alignment is off, the lower margin on the left hand page is higher than the one on the right. 6. Try building from a 5 grid per page model
1. Avoid using a gradiated backgrounds in magazines
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3. The way you've laid the DPS out means it feels as though we are reading it backwards as the page masthead is on the right whilst the article begins on the left
4. The pull quote font on the image is too large and serif. This will need to be changed
5. Alignment is off, the lower margin on the left hand page is higher than the one on the right.
6. Try building from a 5 grid per page model